Proofreading Checklist

by Cheryl on September 23, 2009 · 11 comments

Proofreading your work is a sign that you seek excellence for your blog.

exam-with-correction-marksOften, however, it's hard to proofread your own writing because you know what you want to say, and that's what you see. If English is your second language, or if you didn't really pay that much attention to the details when you were in school, you may find proofreading tedious and difficult.

I loved the details. In fact, I would diagram sentences for fun. That’s the kind of geek I am. It wasn’t really a waste of time, because I now spend hours proofreading and editing copy.

Recently, I edited a magazine article written by a tennis pro – who, I’m sure did not spend time determining parts of speech and analyzing sentence structure. As I worked, I jotted down some of the steps I took and what I looked for.

The following list is not comprehensive – I haven’t even mentioned spelling and punctuation – but maybe a couple of these suggestions will help you as you review your next blog post.

Check the Formatting

  1. Replace double spaces with single spaces. It takes just a few seconds, using the Search and Replace function in a word processor.
  2. Put space between the paragraphs. When the tennis article came to me, it looked like a long string of letters; the only indication of new paragraphs was a two-space indentation. No one wants to read pages that are crowded with text.

Check the Sentence Structure and Word Usage

  1. Passive voice. I changed “When this is accomplished” to “when you accomplish this.”
  2. Sentences that start with “there are.” I changed “There are many reasons a player can lose a point,” to “A player can lose a point for many reasons.”
  3. Consistency of voice. I changed “We constantly build on this for the rest of your tennis playing life” to “we constantly build on this for the rest of our tennis playing lives.”
  4. Consistency of tense. I changed “Many times we lose points because we were out of position” to “...we lose points because we are out of position,” or it could be “…we lost points because we were…”
  5. “ing” words. They can often be simplified. “One of the main tips to being in good court positioning…” became “One of the most important tips about good court positioning….”
  6. Unnecessary prepositions. I eliminated the with in “After we get comfortable with hitting the basic shots.”

Second Read-Through

  1. Preview your article either in print, full screen, or your blog preview.
  2. Pretend you are reading the article for the first time. If you need to, take a short break, come back, stand up to read it or change position in your chair.
  3. Read it out loud, slowly. It’s amazing what your ears hear that your eyes don’t see, especially when it comes to extra words and repetition.
  4. Don’t skip the subheadings! I recently spotted the following subheading in a blog about managing other people: “Become a Manger.” We tend to think because headings and subheadings are in larger print, we’ll notice mistakes. We don’t.

If you’re finding mistakes after publication, or others often point them out to you, it may be time to ask for help – you know – from someone who used to diagram sentences for entertainment.

What about you? Do you have any special techniques for making sure your work is error-free?

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About Writer [Blogging With Success]About Author Cheryl Bryan was Contributing Editor here at Blogging With Success for several post in 2010. She publishes her own blog, Aging in Wonder, and offers proofing and editing services to bloggers and other writers.

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Print Postcards | Ja September 25, 2009

These are excellent Cheryl! I recommend the reading your work aloud tip, that always helps me.

I try to be as concise and clear about what I want to say. For checking spelling, there's always spell check ;) Sometimes I also print my work, then check the spelling on the hard copy. Thanks!

Cheryl September 28, 2009

Thank you, Jarmaine. It's amazing how much reading aloud helps. I guess it's because it engages another one of your senses.

Spell check? That's a good subject for another article! Grammar check is another one.

And regarding printing out your work, the full screen function is a good substitute for that, but if it's my own work, I often print it out. And if I allow the time, letting it sit out overnight often reveals ways I can improve the copy.

Betty September 24, 2009

Very true article. Proofing and grammar very essential. I am learning that.

Cheryl September 25, 2009

Thanks for your comment, Betty. It's an ongoing process for us all. What's really important is the message — words and grammar are just tools. It's like anything else — the better you know how to use the tools, the better your product.

Creative Junkie September 24, 2009

Excellent post! I definitely have trouble with grammar (and as I type this, I'm worried about how awful my grammar may be), especially the consistency of tense. I write in a very informal voice but sometimes, that leads to very informal grammar.

Cheryl September 25, 2009

@Creative Junkie: I really enjoy your chatty style. My usual objection to improper grammar — if that's what you want to call it — is not that it's wrong, but that it detracts from the message. If you read a sentence, and go "Huh?" and have to read it over again, it's probably a problem of tense or voice — or sometimes punctuation. I just read your blog, and didn't do that once. (By the way, I hope Velma won't stay long.)

Bob Bessette September 24, 2009

Hi,

I love the post! I am such a stickler when it comes to grammar and spelling. Dictionary.com is my friend. I am amazed at how many posts I see out there, even by successful bloggers, containing spelling and grammatical mistakes. I usually leave my posts sit for a day or two and constantly check them before publishing. I always move them into Word and perform a grammar and spellcheck in there as well as on my blog platform editor (Squarespace).

I think it's great that you "offer proofing and editing services to bloggers and other writers." I hope you get a lot of work. Thanks for this post and all of the reminders..

Now let me move this comment into Word before I click "Submit"… :-)

Best,

Bob

Cheryl September 24, 2009

Thanks for your kind words, Bob.

I don't know about you, but I have to be careful not to be too obsessive. It can cut down on productivity. I really admire those who are very productive and write well.

I use dictionary.com a lot, too, usually to make sure I'm not misusing words. Thesaurus.com also comes in handy.

Eddie Gear September 24, 2009

Hi there Cheryl,

Nice post! Well highlighted points. Thanks for putting them out for BWS readers.

Cheers,

Eddie Gear

Cheryl September 24, 2009

Thanks, Eddie. I appreciate your feedback.

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